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My drawing of Toma from "Amnesia".

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This piece is great! I love the amount of detail in his jacket and I think you have represented the character very well. I'm not a massive fan of the background because I feel it takes some of your attention. I feel you should have gone for maybe a lighter tone with a paint splat/ firefly effect background however the background is still really nice. I can't emphasise enough how much I am in love with the clothes, the colour scheme just works hand-in-hand. The necklace works well on a character like Toma as it implies to me he is a care-free, relaxed person, which generally is what his style of clothes implies to me also.

Moving upwards, you have done a brilliant job on the hair as it looks more "free-flowing" rather than static. The eyes are unusual but I like them, the green and the orange suggests a fantasy, mystical character.

However, this is a critique so I have to give my honest opinion. The chin looks alien to me, I would have much preffered a rounded chin to make him look more "alive" rather than animated. My second point is also a question. Is this character muscly? If so, I really encourage you to add some definition into the Pecks (Chest) area.

To summarize, I believe this piece is a fantastic replica of Toma. The clothes are fabulous and I believe that they are the best clothes you have drawn to date. I still encourage you to develop on making your chins more natural looking and insist you continue to develop your muscle/chest definition in men and women.

Keep up the great work.

Jordan